Saturday, December 15, 2012

December Updates

Hello Readers!

Here I am, ya'll. Just recently got back from Florida over the last weekend and it was great. I am full of inspiration right now so expect more randomness and chapters! Our five topics today are Radioactive, ideas, The Turn, spin-offs, and monthly updates. I think these are interesting but they might not be...either way...here they are!


Radio-Awesome-Freaking-Crazy-Active!

There will be more chapters coming out. The few that are out now have gotten great reviews. You all seem very interested and it motivates me to write even more! More chapters will be coming soon! I got kind of side tracked with another story but I'm back now...ish. More characters are going to appear. The team of fixers will be formed soon! I'm getting there.

Any Ideas?

I'm asking everyone reading a question. Is there anything that you would like to see happen in Radioactive or in a future story or even in a spin-off. You can comment them or email them to me at theundertakerinsanitystoriz@yahoo.com.

Your ideas can range from space aliens to scary fire monsters....or anything else really. Anything under the sun and in the dark corners of your mind. Keep in mind that just because you comment them doesn't mean that I WILL do it. It just means that I THINK about it.

I would be interesting what you guys think.

Just Keep Turning!

Again, there are more chapters coming. The war between the Wolves and Zara's team will continue for a few more chapters I think. (I haven't written them yet...oops.) There have been great excitement for the Wolves return. I'm exited too. I miss writing about them. Remember, though, they won't be in Radioactive (only Fang) so I don't want 'pretty please' e-mails. This should be their last appearance as a team.

I've got a Spin-Off!

Do you have the urge to write your own Insanity/The Turn/Radioactive spin-off idea and you want to write it yourself? You want to have people actually read it? Well you can send it to me and I can post your writing in the spin-off section!

If you do want your story posted, just send it to me. Please include:

Your name (Or an alias),
The title of your spin-off
Who, or what, the spin-off is about
and
Your spin-off

Please make it appropriate for general audiences!

Updating the Updates

I've moved the Updates to their own page. That's it...there are cool pictures. But yeah, that's it.


Thank you all for reading!

~Undertaker


Questions? Comments? Complaints? Suggestions? Just want to talk? Want a hug? Just comment!

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

The Turn: Chapter Twenty-Six



The Turn
Chapter Twenty-Six
~On the Scent~
Two Years Before The Turn

Naru looked through the information on the laptop that they had collected from their last mission. The others had gotten some rest but he had decided stay up and go over the information. It was the usual business stuff: staff meeting transcripts, corporate e-mails, and the occasional angry e-mail between coworkers. Now he was reading a transcript made a few weeks ago. It looked to be the boss, Mr. Peterson, was talking to an associate he talked to at least once a month.

Mr. Peterson: Have we discussed all that we need to today?
Erin Walter: There is one more thing.
Mr. Peterson: What’s that?
Erin Walter: Scar wants you to know that there seems to be some people a little too interested the New Order.
Mr. Peterson: What do you mean? Are they on to us?
Erin Walter: No. They don’t know about the New Order. Just separate the files and missing funds. Nothing to alert them to us.
Mr. Peterson: Good.
Erin Walter: Don’t let your guard down. Scar can easily cut you out of the equation if the need comes.
Mr. Peterson: Of course.
Erin Walter: Good. We’re done here.
Mr. Peterson: Right.

After reading a little further, Naru found in the files that Mr. Peterson failed to accomplish a task that he was assigned. What the task was, Naru couldn’t figure out. But a few days after the failure, there was an e-mail mentioning the New Order being sent out. After some investigation, Naru found out that it came from Mr. Peterson’s computer. However, the IP address was different from the other e-mails sent from his computer. Most likely someone else sent the e-mail, using another computer to make it look like Mr. Peterson sent the e-mail. Naru was reading more of the documents when Chaud walked up behind him.
“Hey,” Chaud greeted.
Naru nodded, “Hey.”
Chaud pulled out his cellphone and took out the memory card. He threw it in a trashcan and placed a new chip in his phone. Naru noticed and quickly glanced in his direction. He continued reading and ignored it. Chaud was always doing strange things.
Zara walked into the room. She had just woken up from a two hour nap and was making her rounds to make sure everything was in order. Zara walked up to Naru. She gave Chaud a quick glance then got straight to the point.
“How are we doing?” Zara asked Naru.
“There is a lot mentioned about this person named Scar,” Naru reported.
“Scar?” Zara thought a moment, “Didn’t that Mr. Peterson guy ask the other guy who called us out if Mr. Scar was with him?”
“Maybe,” Naru shrugged, “Haven’t been able to research with all this reading.”
Chaud popped into the equation, “Hey, know how long we’ll be staying here?”
“A while,” Zara didn’t even glance up at him.
“A few hours, ‘a while’, or a few days, ‘a while’?” Chaud asked.
Zara looked at him, eyes narrowed, “Until we get the info we need, ‘a while’.”
“Oh,” Chaud looked to one side, “hmm.”
“Hmm,” Naru, who had tuned out for a while now, said as he looked at the computer.
Both Zara and Chaud stopped their arguing and looked at him. Naru hadn’t noticed that the two had become quiet or even that they were straining to see what he found on the computer. He ignored them and looked at the computer. Then he yawned and shut the computer off. Naru got up and walked to go catch a wink of sleep.
“Night, guys,” he said as he walked off.
Zara looked at him, “Well, what did you find?”
Naru shrugged, “Something about an island and a secret project.”
“Secret project?” Chaud asked.
But Naru was already out of ear shot. Chaud placed his hands on his waist and sighed. Zara crossed her arm and looked at the computer.
“What now?” Chaud asked, “Our only computer geek just hit the hay.”
Zara didn’t seem to upset, “Oh, leave it. He’s been working harder than anyone.”
Chaud nodded, “I guess you’re right. What will we do now?”
Just then, the big computer screen turned on displaying the standard Tower welcome screen. Then it displayed a world map and zoomed into California and narrowed in on their current location. Seven points popped up near them at a local bus stop. Seven images of seven people appeared near the points.
“Oh, shoot,” Chaud muttered.
Zara looked at him, “‘Oh, shoot’, what? You know who those people are? Are they looking for us, Chaud?”
“Don’t worry,” Chaud sounded a little less than confident, “Miwa has this place labeled as inactive. They don’t know we’re here.”
“Oh, your friend can do that, huh?” Zara placed her hands on her hips, she was not amused, “Who the heck are they, Chaud? Enough of this ‘I can’t tell you’-‘I don’t know what you’re talking about’ nonsense!”
“You know about the incident in New York that they tell us about in school?” Chaud smiled, “They say the machine malfunctioned.”
Zara roller her eyes and shrugged, “Yeah, so.”
Chaud rubbed the back of his neck, “Well, they left out one tiny teeny detail…”

IOIOIOIOI

Fang disembarked the bus. He looked through the six folders that were given him of the missing Agents. Currently he looked at Zara’s file. She stared back at him from the ID photo with determination and grit. Fang glanced at the next folder holding Chaud’s file. The look in his eye was one of sly secrets. Fang smiled. They might be just kids but together, her determination and his sly secrecy, would be a force to reckon with. He stood off to the side while everyone else got off.
“Why do I ‘ave to carry all da luggage?!” Alister complained. He was adorned with bags and luggage.
“Because I said so,” Fang muttered.
Penelope pushed her glasses up her nose and smiled. She carried her laptop with her at all times. For a brief moment her eyes narrowed in determination then returned to their round carefree selves. She took another step, tripped over her feet and fell face first on the ground.
“Ow…” she stated.
Fang wasn’t too concerned. By now her face had to be the strongest part of her body. She’d be alright.
Shadow helped Penelope up with a smile, “That was one of your better wipeouts. No blood.”
Raven stood behind him without her cloak. She wore all black clothing. When Penelope got to her feet, Raven gave her a new set of glasses.
Lumin followed Arisa who had just run into a gift shop. The girl might be older and a little more mature but there were times that the kid in her shown through. Lumin was here ever following shadow. He was a man of few words to the rest of them but could carry on in hours of conversation with Arisa. They had a deep love for each other that could last through the ages.
Shadow looked back at Fang, “We’ll Sirius said that after digging around they said that with a great deal of certainty that those Agents came to this area. What do you suppose we do?”
Fang looked at the files again, specifically Chaud’s in this situation. He smiled.
“Penelope, when you get the chance, I want the plans to the sewers,” Fang looked at Shadow and showed him Chaud’s file, “We’re up against at least one person that knows the ins and outs of the Tower like the back of his hand. He wouldn’t be stupid enough to get caught on any camera.”
“They could be in a building,” Alister suggested.
Raven rolled her eyes, “And risk getting recognized?”
Alister shifted his weight, “It was just a suggestion.”
Fang thought a moment, “Oh, and Penelope, in your spare time, try and find this kids source. I’m sure by now he knows we’re here. Someone at the Tower is keeping him updated.”
Penelope nodded.
Shadow gave a sly smile, “Anything you want me to do?”
“Look around, see if you can find them,” Fang stated, “I’ll go find ourselves a motel.”
Arisa ran out of the store carrying shopping bags. She saw that everyone looked rather serious. Feeling left out she crossed her arms. A gentle hand rested on her shoulder. She looked up and saw Lumin standing just behind her.
“I’m sure they’ll tell us what we need to know later,” he said, “No need to get upset.”
Arisa smiled, “I guess you’re right. Besides,” Arisa pulled out a t-shirt from one of her bags, “I bought these cute t-shirts! Won’t this one look cute on me! I got some for Penelope and Raven too! Aren’t they adorable?”
Lumin smiled, “I don’t think that pink one is really Raven’s style and I think that Penelope likes dogs better than cats.”
“Really?” Arisa looked at her selection. She shrugged, “Oh, well! I guess these will all have to be for me!”
She turned and ran toward the others and babbled about her shopping spree. Lumin shook his head with a smile and followed behind her. Admittedly, Arisa was a lot to handle but Lumin never seem to mind. 

Thursday, November 29, 2012

Question About Airships

This has nothing to do with any of the stories that I am posting on Insanity Storiz but its for something else. See, I have this dilemma. In this story that I hope will one day be published there is this air ship. 

(You know, like floating ships.)

The thing is....I dont know all that much about boats. Well, I guess determining the size would be more specific. I drew out this really cool looking air craft but then I was like "So how many feet/meters is it?" and I couldn't answer that.

I mean it isn't the largest vessel in the world. Its small but not to small. There will be five people living on it at once so it cant be puny. 

So I'm gonna show you a picture and you just tell me what you see.
Now I'm not saying I'm the best free hand drawer ever so don't chew me out.
Just some questions to bare in mind while you look at it:

How big do you think it is?
Is there something I (the artist) could do better?
Can watermelons spontaneously fall from the sky?


o.o Well... there it is... please comment below.

Tuesday, November 27, 2012

The Turn: Chapter Twenty-Five



The Turn
Chapter Twenty-Five
~Call the Wolves~
Two Years before The Turn

Zara jerked awake. Lazily she looked around the subway. Across from her, Hina lay asleep on her brother’s shoulder. Naru was the most aware and awake of the rest of them. Deontay sat a little ways away. His head tilted forward in slumber. Vicky stood holding on to one of the overhead bars. She had an inner strength that had yet to come out.
“Good morning,” Chaud sounded as chipper as ever.
Zara glared at him. He sat just to her left. Even after all the traveling they had just gone through, he was still in a very good mood. They were all about at the end of their ropes. After touching down in the middle of the desert, they promptly stole a van and drove toward their last location: California. Now they were on their last leg where they needed to get to a safe house.
The train finally stopped and the six weary travelers got off the train. They walked to the surface. Zara shifted the weight of her back on her shoulders before walking on. They continued down the streets until they reached a secluded alley. Deontay lifted a manhole and the rest of them crawled in.
“Oh, yuck,” Hina muttered as she covered her nose.
Naru turned on a flashlight.
“Come on,” Zara sighed, “the sooner we get to where we’re going the sooner we can all sleep.”
Quickly they walked through the sewers until they reached a dead end. A small electrical box sat to one side. Naru opened it revealing a complex security system. He pulled a few wires and typed a little on the key pad. Suddenly the wall pushed back and slid open.
As they walked in, it was immediately noticeable that the air quality was much better. There was a hum as equipment in the room started to activate. A low blue glow signaled things were turning on. The metal grated floor under their feet rattled as they walked.
“Alright, we have a week at most, more likely less, to get the information we need. Chaud, Hina, and Deontay get to sleep first. Vicky will help me get the system up while Naru hooks up his laptop,” Zara instructed.
Groggily, Hina and Deontay walked off. Chaud stood there with his hands in his back pockets.
“You know,” he started to say; “You look pretty tired yourself.”
“Yeah, so,” Zara turned and walked over to one of the computers.
“Well, you should get some rest,” Chaud shrugged.
“I will,” Zara looked up at him, “later.”
“Fine!” Chaud walked away, “Just thought you might want some rest. I was just giving you a chance.”
“Just go!” Zara shook her head. She turned to look at Naru, he looked to be self-reliant. Vicky stood awkwardly waiting for instruction, “You can start over there. Let’s see if we could get some of these computers online. Getting connected to the Tower database won’t be easy without being noticed.”
“I could do it!” Chaud called.
Zara sighed, “Really?”
Chaud turned and walked back. He was typing away at his cell phone. “Shouldn’t take long,” he said when he was done.
Sure enough, more lights turned on and the large screen against the opposite wall turned on. All the computers turned on and the sliding wall closed in place. A small animated character jumped onto all the screens. It twirled and jumped. When it stopped it pulled a box out of its pocket and opened it. The screens all went black for a moment but slowly started to regain their image. A world map appeared on the large screen and different applications on the smaller ones.
“This is the Tower’s database?” Zara asked.
“No,” Chaud shook his head, “It IS the Tower. Well, at least we see what they see. And can use what they use. Miwa really outdid himself.” The latter he muttered to himself.
“Miwa?” Zara asked.
“A friend,” Chaud shrugged and started walking toward the sleeping quarters.
“You know, I was wondering why you were taking forever! I was talking to Bridget for like ten minutes!”
“I have no idea what you are talking about!” Chaud called over his shoulder.
“Chaud, I swear! Arg!” Zara turned her back on Chaud and walked to one of the computers. “Start looking for anything to do with the New Order!” she shouted at Vicky.
“Yes, ma’am,” Vicky darted to another computer and started typing feverishly.

IOIOIOIOI

“Really?” Sirius nodded as he listened to Bridget’s complaint the next day.
“Yeah!” Bridget crossed her arms, “I just thought you might want to know. She was in here wanting to get something from upstairs. I sent her on her way.”
Sirius thought a moment, “That doesn’t sound like her to forget something. Even if she did, it doesn’t sound like her at all to give up that easily.”
“That’s what happened,” Bridget shrugged.
“Thank you,” Sirius continued on his way up to his office.
Kaiba and Kiri were already there. He greeted the both of them a good morning. He sat in his desk and took a quick glance at the piles of paper work on his desk. He took a sip of his coffee. His eyes narrowed in thought. It wasn’t like Zara at all. She would have barged up the stairs with Bridget clinging to her legs. Sirius took out his cell phone. There was a messaged that he received from his son the day before saying something about him staying at a friend’s house. He called Chaud. The call went directly to voicemail that wasn’t set up yet. He then called Deontay’s apartment number. No luck there either. Sirius pressed a button on his desk phone.
“Do you need something?” Kaiba sighed.
“You don’t happen to know where your brother is, do you?” Sirius asked.
There was a slight pause, “Which one?”
“Chaud,” Sirius responded.
“Wasn’t he at Deontay’s house?”
“He switched phones again,” he said as if it has some weight.
Kaiba sighed, “That’s never good. I’ll see if I can track him by his Agent tracking number.”
“Report what you find,” Sirius remembered something, “Call the others too would you?”
“Sure.”
Sirius waited; his elbows on the desk, hands folded anxiously under his chin. Chaud, he knew, had and uncanny ability to disappear. He also knew that his son had at least a dozen different cellphones and switched them around on a regular basis. If one was older than three months, he would toss it and by a new one keeping the memory chip. And then there was his ability to plan and execute. Honestly, Chaud was probably better at that than even Kaiba. It just seemed to come naturally for him.
His cell phone rang. The caller ID read Chaud but he didn’t recognize the number. He answered it.
“Hello?”
“Hey, Dad,” came his son’s voice, “You called?”
“Yes, I did,” Sirius sat back in his chair, “Just wondering where you are.”
“You know, around,” Chaud said in a dismissive manor.
“Around?”
“Yeah, just hanging around with some friends. We’re going for ice cream later. Got to go, okay, dad. We’ll see ya around, alright!” Chaud hung up.
Sirius put down his phone, “Around.”
It’s a hard thing to lie to family. They know you so well. They know that you look up or down when you’re lying or you do that weird thing with your nose. Or that you can’t stop fidgeting or you can’t look them in the eyes. In Chaud’s case, he used the word ‘around’ when he didn’t want to be found. It couldn’t be helped. It was his family tell. Sirius tried to call the number again.
I’m sorry; this is not a valid number. Goodbye!
Kaiba walked in, “Their Agent numbers aren’t in the system. It’s as if they were wiped from the system. And all their phone numbers aren’t valid anymore.”
Kiri walked in just then, “Kaiba had me check the security cameras. They were disabled yesterday and any existing footage was erased.”
Kaiba looked at his father’s blank expression, “You don’t look surprised.”
“He called,” Sirius stood up, “He’s says they’ll see us ‘around’.”
Kaiba rolled his eyes, “Great.”
Kiri looked around, confused, “What? What does that mean?”
Sirius smiled, “It means we won’t be seeing them for a while.
Kiri looked at Sirius, “You mean they left the Island?”
“Zara was never really the type to give up,” Sirius walked out of the office.
Kaiba followed him, “What are we going to do? We have agents on AWAL. We need to get them back but we don’t even have a place to start.”
Sirius entered the elevator, “We’ll get them back.”
“You’re fairly confident,” Kiri noted.
“More like terrified, really,” Sirius looked to Kaiba, “Your mother would have my head if she found out.” He sighed, “This will be an interesting conversation at dinner tonight.”
Kiri saluted, “Good luck, sir.”
“You did set up your will so I will inherit your seat right?” Kaiba’s expression was all serious.
“Thank you,” he said to Kiri. He turned to Kaiba, “Don’t get ahead of yourself.”
The elevator door closed.

IOIOIOIOI

There was a knock at the door. A dissatisfied groan was heard from the sleeping figure in bed. Gold eyes looked at a nearby clock. A sliver of light made its way through the drawn curtains.
“Go away,” the man growled.
“I would, but I can’t,” a figure walked into the room, “We have a visitor!”
Fang sat up in bed. He rubbed the sleep from his eyes. His hair was now mostly white than black. There were still a few black strands to be seen but not many. The night before had been a long one. Alister had though that it would be a brilliant idea to dabble in the arts and take on painting. All well and good but there was one thing Alister failed to mention: he was intending to ‘paint’ with a flamethrower. Thought it would be ironic or something stupid like that. Because of that, Fang had been up late that night.
He looked up at Shadow as he rummaged through his drawers, “Who’s here?”
“You’d never guess,” Shadow smiled.
Fang waited a moment for more information. There was none, “That’s why I’m asking. Who is visiting?”
Shadow tossed some clothed at Fang, “Here. You’ll just have to see when you get down there.”
“I swear, Shadow, tell me or I will strangle you! I do not have the patience today,” Fang stood up, his eyes narrowing on Shadow.
Shadow didn’t feel threatened, “Tsk, tsk, are we impatient today. You should curb that attitude before to meet out guest.”
Fang stepped closer to Shadow. Seeing that Fang just might make good on his threat, Shadow made his way briskly to the door.
“Shall I tell out guest that you should be down in the dining room shortly?” Shadow said with a smile.
Fang got dressed and freshened up. He walked down the steps and entered the living room. Arisa, now a blossoming young lady, sat on the couch texting away on one of those gizmos. Naturally, Lumin, formally known as Blue, was sitting next to her reading a book.
“Good morning, Fang,” Lumin acknowledged without looking up from his book.
Arisa looked up from her text, “Hello!”
Fang nodded a greeting to both of them. He passed the large staircase as Penelope ran down the stairs. Inevitably, she tripped and broke her glasses all before she even changed out of her pajamas. Fang paused a moment, considering whether he should turn and help. He glanced over his shoulder.
“Ow,” she muttered.
Penelope pulled a spare from her pocket. She turned to see Fang and smiled sheepishly. Fang determined that she would be fine and carried on.
Alister walked out of the kitchen. His flaming red hair was a complete mess. He had an automatic weapon slung over his shoulder. Fang eyed him closely, wondering what he had done to the kitchen this time.
Raven sailed past both of them, a canvas in her arms as she headed out to the backyard. After Fang had forbidden Alister to even think about painting, Raven had taken up the notion. They had plenty of spare canvases now and Fang saw it as something to help her express herself.
Finally, Fang walked into the dining room. He paused only slightly when he saw who it was.
Sirius tuned at Fang’s entrance. He had been looking at a painting on the wall. Fang walked cautiously forward.
“Hello Fang,” Sirius greeted.
Fang said nothing.
“Well, I’m sure you want to get straight to the point,” Sirius said.
Fang looked around, “More or less.”
Sirius sighed, “I have some Agents I need you to find.”