The Turn
Chapter
Eight
~Capture the
Flag~
Three Years
before the Turn
Zara jumped
over a fallen trunk and ran through the woods. Her katana hung from a twin back
scabbard in the form of an ‘X’. She wore a tight black sweater and tight
fitting pants. Her feet seemed to skim the ground and she barely made a noise. She
saw movement in the trees to her left and a flash of white to her right. A
brown sack sailed for her head. Zara unsheathed her left katana and cut the
sack on its string, spilling its sandy contents onto the forest floor.
She landed in
a crouch and raised her right hand in a fist. There was silence as she tried to
listen for what might be ahead.
4-34, 4-35, 4-36…
Zara dropped
her hand and proceeded forward. She slid under a tree log into a small clearing
surrounded by rocks. Cautiously she walked around inspecting each stone.
Eventually, she felt more comfortable and whistled. There was a pause before
the whistle was repeated. When she heard the echo she crouched down in the nook
of one of the rocks, hidden and able to observe what was going on. After that,
she waited.
It had been a
little over a week since the day they first started training. Now they were in
team training with less than two days to the team assessment. As the team
leader, it was Zara’s job to know each members weakness and strength. It was
far harder than she had anticipated. She had sat in on Deontay’s training Vicky
in the school boxing gym. Vicky had vastly improved not only in strength but in
confidence. As time went on, she was actually a very friendly and bubbly girl.
There was a
rustle in the trees. Zara stayed still as to not be noticed. Suddenly, Naru
dropped down from the trees into the small clearing. He stood up slowly,
looking around carefully. Zara could see three needles in each hand. She knew
it was safer to let Naru find her than for her to come out of her hiding spot.
Naru’s
strength: his speed and his pin point accuracy. He was like a tree snake in the
trees. You could look but you wouldn’t be able to find him; until it was too
late, that is. He was their best sniper. Chaud had been helping him learn to
use the weapon. From what she heard, there were a few close calls on Chaud’s
part. Naru’s weakness: he didn’t have the best arms strength. Granted he could
climb a tree like no one’s business but if he were to fight in hand to hand
combat, there was a strong possibility that he would lose.
His blue eyes
fell on her hiding spot. He had no trouble making her out. She stood and Naru
retracted his initial weapons. There was a noise behind Zara and she turned
suddenly, grabbing the handle of her weapon. She sighed with a hint of
annoyance. Chaud looked down at her with that obnoxious smile on his face.
Chaud’s
strength: give him a gun and he can clear a path for you in less than thirty
seconds. He was also resourceful. If Zara came up with a plan, Chaud would be
the one to get his hands on what they would need. And also he was crazy rich.
Chaud’s weakness: that darn smile that made everyone wants to kill him. Or was
that just her?
Vicky peaked
around one of the smaller rocks. Her strength: she certainly had a healthy kind
of spunk. Other than that, she looked average. But as it turned out, she was
almost as good at boxing as Deontay. She was a force to be reckoned with. Her
weakness: she still lacked some confidence. At least she didn’t have a smile
that one would want to slap off of someone’s
face.
Deontay and
Hina clamored over one of the rocks one after the other. Deontay’s strength:
what wasn’t he good as? He was a rock. Try moving a boulder one day and you get
a hint of how great his defense was. After that have someone push a boulder off
a cliff with you under it to get a sense of his attack strength. The best offense was a great defense, unless the defense and offense were exactly the
same wrapped into one person. His weakness: speed. He could keep up with the
others but if he was up against someone like Naru…it wouldn’t be pretty.
Hina’s
strength was by all means her power. It was awesome; good for offense and
defense. Her weakness however was her temper. As long as she kept that in
check, they should all be fine.
Zara took a
deep breath, “Okay, how are we going to get that flag?”
“It’s just
over the next ridge,” Naru commented, “I saw it from my perch in the trees.”
“See anything
unusual?” Zara asked.
Naru nodded
his head, “It’s out in the open in the middle of a field.”
“That’s
unusual?” Chaud asked.
“How many
times have you known something to be that easy?” Zara rolled her eyes.
Chaud rolled
onto his heels, “I’m not going to answer that.”
Zara looked
up at the sky in an attempt to control herself, “Alright, I guess we’ll charge
it.”
“Isn’t that what
you don’t want to do when it seems too easy?” Hina looked board.
“Exactly,”
Hina nodded, “We’ll do the very thing they don’t expect us to do.”
“Unless they
expect us,” Chaud stated, “Then we’d be doing exactly what they expect us to do
then it wouldn’t be a surprise, would it?”
“Exactly,”
Zara said after running through what Chaud said one last time.
“May I
suggest partners?” Vicky said quietly, a nervous smile on her face.
“What do you
mean?” Deontay asked.
“Well, if we
have a partner to watch our back, and vice versa, it would be easier and safer
to rush them,” Vicky was rubbing her hands together nervously, “But the partner
would have to be almost opposite, you know, to cover the others weakness.”
Zara thought
about it for a moment. It seemed to make sense. Why not give it a try? She
opened her mouth to assign partners when Chaud interrupted her.
“So who wants
to partner with who?” he said with a smile.
Zara rolled
her eyes.
Deontay put
an arm around Vicky, “I guess we’re pretty opposite. Don’t you think Vick?”
“I guess,”
her voice was barely louder than a whisper.
Hina
stretched, “I guess that means Naru and me are partners. Who can be more
opposite, right?”
“It’s Naru
and I,” Naru muttered.
Hina shrugged
it off.
Zara felt
Chaud fist bump her arm, “I guess that leaves you and me, partner,” he said.
“Okay,” Zara
ignored him, “Chaud and I will take lead. We’ll be a distraction while Naru and
Hina get to the flag. But don’t actually get it, make an effort and make it
look like your trying to get the flag while Vicky and Deontay make their way
unnoticed. Deontay I want you to stay back and keep an eye on things. Just
don’t let your partner down. Vicky, you will be the one to get the flag. Make
sure you avoid as much fighting as possible while the rest of us make a scene.
Everyone understand?” Everyone nodded. “Chaud and I will come from the center,
Hina and Naru from the right, and Vicky and Deontay take on the left. Let’s
go.”
Everyone
scattered into the forest. Zara felt Chaud’s presence to her right. He kept up
with her pace easily. She glanced at him for a brief moment when she heard
something on her left. Zara looked to see another contraption shoot up from the
bushes. A crossbow released a bolt before she could register what the device
was. She felt someone grab her by the waist and pull her to the ground. The
bold smacked into a tree with a loud thwack!
For a moment, Zara lay on her back registering what had just happened.
“Could we go
now?” Chaud asked. He lay on his back, propped up on his elbows.
Zara took one
look at him and rolled her eyes.
“What? I did
just save your life!” he exclaimed as he stood up.
“I saw it,”
Zara lied.
“No, you
didn’t.”
“Shut up.”
“Fine.”
Zara and
Chaud reached the edge of the field. The rest of the journey was uneventful.
They stayed in the uncertain shadows of the trees and waited. Zara crouched
down. She could see the green flag easily on the top of a small rise. It didn’t
look like there were any guards or anything like Crow said there would be. The
wild grass swayed in the wind and was about as tall as the average man’s waist.
After a
moment of assessing, she looked up at Chaud. She was about to tell him what to
do when he brought his finger’s to his lips and blew. A series of notes echoed
into the forest. It was the exact notes of a local woodland bird. There were a
series of other birds that responded but there were two in particular that Zara
was looking for. She smiled. The others were in position too.
Chaud brought
out one of his guns and checked his supply of bullets, satisfied he held it loosely
in his hand.
“Don’t kill
anyone,” Zara muttered.
“Don’t
worry,” Chaud smiled, “Their blanks.”
“What good
are blanks?”
“They scare
the heck out of people.”
Zara waited
for a few more seconds, “Start the clock.”
Chaud whistled
again. Then the response. They started counting after the last whistle.
0-1, 0-2,
0-3, 0-4, 0-5…
“Ready?” Zara
asked.
0-6, 0-7…
“When you
are,” Chaud responded.
0-8, 0-9…
Zara sprang
out of the tree cover with Chaud hot on her heels. Learning from before, she
didn’t risk a glance to her sides to see if the others were following suit.
They were half way across the field and still hadn’t run into any opposition.
Something flew past Zara’s head from behind. She looked quickly and saw several
of the shrine residence with arrows behind them.
“Get down!”
Chaud shouted.
Without
question, Zara dropped to the ground just as a bolt flew overhead. Several
devices had risen from the tall grasses and fired their supply of bolts in
rapid succession. She glanced behind her at the coming line of people. Zara
started crawling low to the ground. Their best bet at the moment was to disable
the crossbow because if they waited, they would be found and killed already.
She reached
the tripod on which it stood. It was staked into the ground. Chaud caught up
and got one of his guns and made it a sword. He hacked at one of the three legs
nearly cutting it through and through. Zara got into a crouch, still below the
grass line and waited. When the device tipped to one side she got to her feet.
She met face to face with one of the ones after them.
Zara swung
her weapon from its right sheath. Her opponent drew a weapon of his own. His
darker clothing told Zara that it was Crow. She grabbed her other katana and
swung it at his midline. Crow jumped back. For a moment, Zara heard the
clashing of swords as Chaud engaged in battle with another person. The ground
shifted slightly. A few of the attacking force fell to their knees but Crow and
Zara stayed on their feet. Zara rushed at Crow, attacking overhead. Crow raised
his weapon and blocked her attach. Zara’s katana slid off Crow’s sword as she
dropped to her knees. She thrust forward her left katana and Crow avoided it by
moving easily to one side. He spun and elbowed her in her right side. The
unexpected counter attack sent her on her side in the grass.
As she hit
the ground, she looked to the flag. She saw the green flag in Vicky’s hands;
the girl had managed to go unnoticed so far. Zara fought against the urge to
call out to her but something caught Crow’s attention. He couldn’t see what
Zara saw but he knew something was up. He called the attention of three others
that were close by. The three men saw Vicky and started after her.
Vicky swung
the flag in a horizontal arc. A blast of wind struck the three men, blowing
them back. With her path temporarily cleared, Vicky started running. Two other
men were after her but fell suddenly to the ground with needles sticking out
from their legs. She vanished into the tree line with a line of men on her
tail. Deontay ran into the forest from a different route.
Zara kicked
out her leg hitting Crow in the shin. She then hooked her foot behind his ankle
and retracted her leg causing him to fall onto his back. She jumped to her feet
and grabbed one of her katana. Zara leaned over Crow with the tip of her blade
at his neck.
“Alright, I
give,” he muttered.
Zara looked
to Chaud. His back was to her as he too finished his opponents with the loud pop of his guns. Of course they were
blanks but as they had discussed before, they scare the heck out of people. He
looked back at her to see how she was fairing.
Zara started,
“I think we—”
“Check on
her?” Chaud finished, “Yeah, it’d be a shame for her to have a heart attack
right about now.”
They both ran
back into the forest to see if they could find Vicky. There was a trail of
pained bodies throughout the woods, presumably Vicky’s doing. Eventually, they
reached a large tree. Deontay stood at its base looking up into the tree. He
looked back at his approaching team mates.
“She’s up
there but she won’t come down,” he stated.
Zara looked
up. She couldn’t see anything, “Where?”
Deontay
pointed, “There.”
Again, Zara
couldn’t see anything. She shrugged and left it up to Deontay. Naru and Hina
walked up just then with Crow not too far behind.
“Interesting
tactic,” Crow began his assessment, “You all could be a little less reckless
but I guess that’s asking a little too much. You all did know that your odds
were like 4 to one right?”
Zara hadn’t
taken that into account.
“Anyway,”
Crow continued, “Your fighting has improved after the balance training,
strength training, defense and offense training and flexibility training. I’m
sure you have lovely memories of that to last you a life time. You all could
use to drop the double cheese burgers in your diet, but then again, who
doesn’t. Other than a few minor things,” Crow paused, “I think you’re ready for
the assessment in a few days. You won’t need to come in tomorrow.”
“Won’t need
to come in?” Hina couldn’t have been happier.
“Why?”
Deontay asked.
Crow
shrugged, “I can’t sand any one of you.”
“Awe, Crow!”
Chaud laughed, “You love us, you know you do!”
“Would that
still apply if I made you run around the Island a couple of times?” Crow raised
an eyebrow.
Chaud shook
his head, “Maybe not.”
“What do you
want us to do for the next few days?” Zara asked
Crow
shrugged, “Relax, practice, I don’t care. At this stage, I’ve done all I can
for you. It’s about time you figure out who you want to be and the steps to get
there. Good luck,” Crow said before turning toward the shrine.
“Will you be
watching us?” Naru asked as Crow was walking away.
Crow stopped
a moment and seemed to be thinking over how to answer, “I guess I could venture
into the city a while.”
“Sounds
good,” Deontay smiled. He looked up into the tree, “Are you coming down or
what?”
The sun
started to set by the time they managed to get Vicky out of the tree.
Apparently, she had gotten stuck and didn’t know how to get down. Naru, Zara
and Deontay all had to climb the tree to get her down while Hina and Chaud
stayed at the base to catch anyone who would be unfortunate to fall.
“Nothing like
getting a team member out of a tree to build a team,” Crow sighed as he walked
toward the shrine.
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Haha, I like Crow, he's funny. And as for what your friend said, I was just having the same thought. I could easily imagine you writing too much for one blog. I was also comparing your first Insanity chapters to these and I think your writing style seems to have improved, too. Keep writing, I love these guys too:)
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