To the brave Anonymous who set me straight…
A Little
Insanity
A Spin-Off
~Like
Brothers Should Be~
*Warning!
The Characters May Be Completely Different!*
“Fang! Fang!
Wake up! You promised you’d take me fishing! Come on!” a voice pushed its way
through his dream, “Please, Fang?”
Fang opened
his eyes, slowly at first. His back was to his younger brother’s bed. He felt
his brother’s hands pushing against his back, trying to wake him. The sun
hadn’t even crested the horizon. There was only the pre-sunrise glow that
entered the room through the single window in their room. Fang stayed still a
little while longer hoping his brother, Shadow, would end up leaving him alone.
“Fang?”
Shadow climbed on top of the bed and leaned over Fang’s body to get a better
look at him.
Shadow sighed
and sat down on his ankles. Fang could sense his brother’s disappointment. He
opened his eyes and pulled his pillow over his head.
“I’m up,” he
groaned, “Just give me a few minutes, will ya?”
Shadow smiled
again and jumped down from the bed, “Mom made us a special breakfast so don’t
take forever, okay?”
Shadow’s foot
falls receded out of the room. The door slammed shut and Shadow made his way down
the stairs. Fang waited a moment before rolling over in bed. He looked around
their room. There were two beds, one on either side of the room, splitting
their room, in essence, in half. On Shadow’s side of the room there were toys
scattered on the floor. The bed was a mess and the thumb tacks that pinned up
hand drawn drawings were in disarray and held the pieces of paper every which
way. There was a shelf over the bed. On it was a stuffed teddy bear with only
one eye left and a box. The box read ‘Treasure Chest: Keep Out!’ all over it in crayon. There was a
picture of a sepia photo of Fang and Shadow. A six year old Shadow took up most
of the picture showing off the two gaps in his smile. Fang, ten years old,
stood in the background with a piece of string in his hand. One end of the
string held the pair of teeth and the other end was tied to their bedroom door.
With effort,
a fourteen year old Fang rolled out of bed. He made his bed. Unlike his
brother’s side of the room, his was neat and organized. Everything had a place.
Any pictures on his wall were in a homemade frame that he built in their
father’s shed and were hung with a single nail. All of his toys were organized
in their designated boxes under his bed. There was a shelf over his bed as
well. It carried a special toy rabbit. It was in perfect condition. He too had
a box. It contained only the most perfect things that he found around the farm
like leaves that hadn’t been eaten into, or acorns that had the perfect sized
top, or even a smooth pebble. There also was a picture of Fang’s shelf. It was
a sepia photo of their family picture where everyone was neat and clean and
smiling. Fang admitted that he was a bit of a perfectionist for being 14 years
old. He also knew that Shadow, his 10 year old brother, was the complete
opposite.
“Fang! Hurry
up!” Shadow called from the kitchen.
“The fish
aren’t going anywhere!” Fang shouted back.
Fang made his
way down stairs. There was a small four person table in the center of the
kitchen. Their mother wasn’t currently in the kitchen. It was safe to assume
that she was out in the garden. There were two bowls of oatmeal. Shadow’s had
pieces of fruit in them while Fang’s was simple with a drizzling of brown sugar
in it. Fang first took a sip of his water while Shadow nearly downed his class
or fresh orange juice. The brothers sat across from each other. They were
opposites, it was pain to see. Fang had neat short hair while Shadow’s could
house a family of birds quite nicely. Fang’s clothes were simple, a t-shirt and
shorts, but they were without holes. Shadow’s clothes had so many holes and
stitches that there were holes on top of stitches. Fang ate his breakfast
quietly while Shadow was face deep in his oatmeal.
When they
were finished, Fang and Shadow walked up stairs to brush their teeth. As Fang
brushed, he stared at the broken mirror in front of him. It was something he
found incredibly annoying. His eyes followed the crack as it cut across his
face from the lower left end to the upper right corner. He looked at his
brother’s reflection to distract him from the imperfection. He moved his
toothbrush from the right side of his mouth to his left. Shadow looked up at
him briefly and copied him, brushing on the left side of his mouth. After that,
Fang brushed his front teeth. Shadow followed suit. When Fang was finished, he
opened his mouth and brushed the tops of his teeth. Shadow did everything
exactly as Fang did. It was amusing, a nice distraction from the crack in the
mirror. After rinsing their mouths, Fang exited the bathroom with Shadow close
behind.
They walked
outside, making sure to put on their tattered shoes on the way out. That was
the one thing that Fang couldn’t seem to keep in perfect condition, especially
with all the chores he had to do. Two metal lunch boxes sat on the front step.
Close to the
farm house was the enormous barn. Behind the barn was their father’s shed. They
waved as they saw their father on his tractor in a distant field. They knew he
couldn’t see them but it was just something they did.
Fang opened
the little shed. It was used for many things like wood working, father’s tools,
mother’s gardening utensils, and most importantly their fishing equipment.
Shadow ran past his brother and collected their fishing poles that were made of
the longest sticks they could find. Fang had just off any sprouting branches
and sanded them until they were without bark and smooth. Their mother gave them
some of her strongest string to use as line and their father took time at the
end of his day to make them hooks and small weights. Shadow looked at Fang with
a huge smile on his face. Fang grabbed their tackle box and fishing net. He set
all the items in a deep-seated wheelbarrow. Together they wheeled the barrow out
of the shed. Shadow went back in and grabbed a few empty cans and a small
bucket.
Being the
oldest, Fang took the responsibility of wheeling the barrow to where it needed
to be. Shadow walked by his side, rambling on how much fun they would have. Their
father had been very merciful in letting them off their chores for the day,
saying how kids should be allowed to be kids. They walked down the gravel path that
went into the woods by their house. There was a bridge and a small creak where
the two boys stopped. Shadow grabbed the empty cans, took off his shoes, and
ran down to the moist soil by the water’s edge.
Fang went
down beside his brother. He squatted as he fingered as the moist dirt. Shadow
was on his hands and knees digging in the soil. Fang found a worm and asked
Shadow for a can. When he received it he placed the worm inside then placed
some dirt over it so it wouldn’t dry out.
Shadow’s head
jerked up. He smiled as he saw a large cricket in a nearby piece of grass. He dove
for it, cupping his hands over the insect. Fang waited for the result. Shadow
looked back at his older brother and smiled victoriously. He held up the tiny
creature by its wings.
“Look!”
Shadow exclaimed.
“I see,” Fang
said as he started digging in the dirt again.
Shadow looked
at his catch then at the open can, “Where should we put it?”
“In a can,”
Fang stated, “Just break its legs so it can’t jump. You’ve already ruined its
wings. It shouldn’t be able to get away.”
Shadow nodded
and did what Fang recommended then placed the cricket in a can. He watched it
for a moment at the bottom of the can, “What other bugs are good for fishing?”
“I don’t know,”
Fang shrugged, pulling a nightcrawler from the ground, “I’m pretty sure that a hungry
fish will eat anything smaller than itself. This one’s a long one.”
Shadow’s eyes
widened with interest as Fang showed him the long thick worm, “That’s bigger
than the ones we usually get!”
“It’s a nightcrawler.
They usually come out after it rains when the dew in on the grass but it’s really
wet here and it must have gotten lost or something.”
“Cool!”
Shadow said, though he didn’t really understand a word of it.
They dug in
the dirt and caught bugs up until noon. When the sun was at its highest, they
took a break. Fortunately, Fang remembered to bring the lunches that their mother
had made for them. The two boys sat on the bridge, their legs dangling over the
edge and at their lunches. They talked about childish boy things like who the
best super hero was and how annoying girls were (Except their own mother of
course. She seemed to be the only sane girl in the world).
After making
sure that they had enough water in their canteens they set out toward the
river. The creek that they were currently sitting fed into a larger slower
river. It was perfect for fish and perfect for those catching fish.
Fang pushed
the wheelbarrow along the path. Eventually they reached the river. Fang showed
his younger brother where the best fishing spot was. It was under a large tree.
There was an old dock that wasn’t used much anymore. There was plenty of shade
and room on the dock for fishing. After they situated everything Fang helped
Shadow put a worm on his hook.
“I want a
nightcrawler!” Shadow complained.
“You’re not
getting one,” Fang stated.
“Why?”
“Because I
say so.”
When Fang was
ready, he threw his line in to the water. The weight their father made helped
the line sail far. Fang sat on the edge of the dock. Shadow had watched him
closely and copied everything Fang did before sitting beside his brother. When Fang
took a drink, Shadow took a drink. When a fish made off with Fang’s bait,
Shadow feigned disappointment and pulled his line in even if he didn’t have to.
“You still
have your bait,” Fang said as he re-baited his hook.
“I thought I lost
it,” Shadow answered, his eyes watching carefully as Fang used one of their prized
insects.
Over all it
was a very uneventful day. There caught a few small fishes but they threw them
back. That way the small fishes could grow into big fishes and they could catch
them later. But other than that, there was nothing to write home about. Fang was
a little disappointed. He looked over at his brother expecting to see him upset
about the day’s events but to his surprise Shadow had the biggest smile on his
face. There was dirt and sweat all over Shadow’s face. His fingernails were
filthy from digging in the dirt. There were scrapes and cuts up and down his
arms and legs. Fang could almost swear that he saw something move in his
brother’s hair and yet Shadow looked like the happiest boy on the face of the
planet.
“What are you
so happy about?” Fang asked.
Shadow looked
confused, “What do you mean?”
“I mean, we haven’t
caught anything good all day. Why are you smiling?”
Shadow smiled
again, “Because I didn’t really want to go fishing,” Fang glared at him a
moment, “I wanted to go fishing with you. Hey! I think I caught something!”
Fang looked, “No,
it’s just another little one.”
He looked at
his brother again. All Shadow had really wanted was to spend time with his
brother. It didn’t matter that they were doing just as long as they were
together. Even though they were complete opposites and Fang could spot every
one of Shadow’s imperfections, they were brothers and that was how it was going
to be.
“Hey, Fang?”
Shadow asked.
“Yeah?”
“After we’re
done, do you think you could cut off the hook on my fishing pole?”
“Why would
you want me to do that?”
“So I could
put it in my treasure box.”
“Why would
you want to put a used fish hook in your treasure box?”
“So I can
remember this day for the rest of my life. Forever and ever and ever. Would you,
Fang? Pretty please?”
Fang paused a
moment, “Fine. But the next time you want to go fishing you can’t wake me up
until six in the morning. Got it?”
“Okay!”
As the sun
started to set and the boys were growing hungry they packed up their fishing
supplies and headed home.
“Can we do
this again tomorrow?” Shadow asked.
“We have
chores tomorrow.”
“The next
day?”
“More chores.”
“The day
after that?”
“Chores.”
“How about
the day after the day after that?”
“Shadow…”
“Yeah?”
“Let’s ask
dad, alright.”
“Okay!”
Shadow smiled, “Fang?”
Fang sighed, “Yeah?”
“You’re the
best big brother I’ve ever had. The bestest ever!”
Fang smiled, “You
too, Shadow.”
:D *that's all I have to say right now*
ReplyDelete~Undertaker
TT.TT that was so beautiful i almost cried!! oh and sorry about not having the story done i have been sick lately and i am now stacked with homework. TT.TT
ReplyDeleteLol! I'm glad that you liked it! Oh, and it's fine that you don't have it done yet! I know how it is! I hope you survive the homework avalanche!
Delete~Undertaker
I'm barely surviving it DX. That and have people on fanfiction.net demanding i update my story not to mention i have people on fictionpress.net doing the same as well. DX
DeleteBelieve me, I've been there. As much as I love you guys, the blog takes the back burner when it comes to schooling and family and friends and stuff. So those Fictionistas will just have to wait until your good and ready. :3
Delete~Undertaker
Aww Shadow's so cute x3
ReplyDeleteHe is, isn't he!
Delete~Undertaker