The Hunters
~05~
Dark
Huntress
Big Bertha |
Sanya sighed
as she shut off the hot water. It was her first decent bath in weeks. She
stepped out of the shower and got dressed. Upon opening the bathroom door she
nearly bumped into Yin, Undertaker’s faithful shadow. She apologized and they
both went their way. Sanya got to her room. It always amazed her how much room
Undertaker had. There was a designated room for each of the team and a few
extra rooms for those extra visitors.
Out of
curiosity, Sanya knocked on Ren’s door. She wasn’t expecting an answer but she
got one.
“Come in,”
Ren said
Sanya opened
the door and saw Ren sitting on his bed reading.
“Are you all
rested up?” Sanya asked.
“Nope,” Ren
smiled.
Sanya
shrugged, “Yeah, me neither. We got in past midnight last night. Then the
adrenaline rush didn’t wear off until later.”
“Same here,”
Ren nodded.
Ren turned
and looked out his window. Shortly after, the sound of a motor bike could be
heard in the distance.
“Ai and
Dante!” Sanya dashed down the hallway.
“What are you
so excited about?” Ren called after her.
“I get to
braid Ai’s hair!” Sanya called back.
Ren rolled
his eyes. Sanya ran down the steps and into the small store. Akaban sat at the
casher’s desk, his feet propped up on the desk and his red had over his eyes.
The chair was tipped back but was balanced perfectly. Sanya barely noticed him
as she dashed out the door. She stood outside and waited in anticipation for
the straight faced little girl.
“Waiting for
someone?” a voice startled her.
Sanya turned
and noticed Undertaker sitting on a bench, “Oh, sorry, I didn’t see you sitting
there.”
Undertaker
blew a trail of smoke out of his mouth. He temporarily removed the long wooden
pipe from his mouth. Though the brim of his hat was low over his eyes his green
eyes looked at her with kindness. He spoke in a voice somewhere between his
‘old’ and ‘young’ voices. He didn’t feel the need to hide his true voice with
people he knew well.
“I could only
assume that you’re waiting for Ai,” Undertaker smiled.
Sanya nodded,
“Yeah.”
Sanya’s words
seemed caught in her throat. No matter how many times she met him, Undertaker
seemed to counter her expectations. He was a legend in the Hunter community.
There were stories upon stories about his power and victories. He was by far
the most powerful blood vampire alive on earth. Undertaker was an Elite by
birth but something happened early in his life and vampire blood entered his
veins and changed his eye color. He was 100% Elite and yet he was 100% vampire
and most importantly he acted very human.
Of course
when Sanya got the news that she was to be transferred to Undertaker’s team,
she nearly fainted. Actually she did, several times. It took her nearly five
weeks to figure out what to wear when she met him. When she did finally meet
him, it wasn’t at all what she expected. She walked through the shop doors in
time to hear him swear at the golden pocket watch he carried. He didn’t swear
just once, but an entire sentence worth. When he finally noticed she was there
he threw the watch on the desk and lit his pipe at the very verbal disapproval
of Yin.
And now, here
he was, the greater than greats sitting on an old dusty bench smoking so
casually as if he wouldn’t want to be doing anything else. And he was talking
to her.
“I think it’s
good that you give Ai so much attention. She needs a sister to braid her hair.
She has a brother for practically everything else,” he looked down the street,
“Ah, here they come.”
Dante drove
up and turned off the bike. Ai jumped off and was immediately swooped up by
Sanya who carried her inside. Dante rolled his eyes and started rolling his
bike into the side alley. Undertaker looked up as Dante passed by again.
“I hope the
trip was uneventful,” Undertaker stated.
Dante smiled,
“Nothing Ai and I couldn’t handle. You got anything to eat?”
Undertaker
pointed toward the shop entrance behind him, “Check the pantry.”
“Thanks,”
Dante walked inside.
He glanced
over at Akaban as he walked passed. Dante bumped into Yin as she was on her way
outside.
“What’s up
with him?” Dante asked.
“He never really
said,” Yin said, “I think he’s mentally preparing himself for his new partner
through some kind of meditation. Either that or he’s just sleeping.”
“Man, he’s
really down about this isn’t he?” Dante observed.
Yin shrugged,
“He thinks partners, especially new partners, are a waste of time.”
“Ai’s saved
my sorry butt more times than I care to admit,” Dante turned to the kitchen,
“I’m hungry. Where’s the food?”
Yin watched
as Dante walked into the kitchen. She dreaded to see what was left, or rather
what wasn’t left, after the Dante hurricane blew through their food stores. Yin
looked at Akaban and shook her head. She walked up to him and moved a delicate
looking vase away from close proximity to his feet. After that she walked
outside and looked over at Undertaker.
Undertaker
looked at her from under his hat. He blew his pipe again just before Yin
grabbed the pipe from his grasp.
“What did I
tell you about smoking?” Yin asked.
“I distinctly
remember that you said that it was essential to my health,” Undertaker smiled
jokingly.
“Do you have
a death wish?” Yin sighed, “You have no motivation for self-health.”
“I lived tens
of thousands of years before you started nannying me and I’ll live ten thousand
more,” Undertaker laughed.
Yin placed
her hands on her hips, “Thanks to me we might be able to stretch that number a
little.”
Undertaker
lifted the rim of his had out of his eyes, “I’d love to continue this
conversation but our new team member is coming down the road.”
Yin looked up
and nodded, “That looks like her.”
“Do you think
she buys all of those stories about me?” Undertaker’s smile widened.
“How am I
supposed to know?” Yin shrugged.
Undertaker
reached into his coat for his gold watch, “It’s strange how these trinkets
cease to work when you need them to.”
“You can be a
horrible man, master,” Yin shook her head and walked inside.
Undertaker
shrugged and smiled, “Hasn’t been the first time one has called me that.”
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“Everyone
gather around!” Undertaker called, “Our newest member is here!”
Akaban looked
out from under his hat. His gaze wasn’t at all pleasant. Ai sat on a nearby
chair with her hair in an array of braids. She sat patiently as Sanya braided
her hair. Ren sat on one of the tables reading his book. Dante ate in the
kitchen doorway while Yin walked around cleaning the book shelves full of
trinkets and books.
“Now, now,
let’s not have everyone get excited at once,” Undertaker muttered, “I’d like
you to meet Zathura.”
The shop door
opened and a girl walked in. She wore a black corset that at certain angles
shimmered dark blue. Over her shoulders was a short length black cropped
jacket. A black lase necklace was wrapped around her neck. Three blue stones
were strung in the necklace. Blue eye shadow decorated her eyes while black
lipstick stained her hips. Her hair was black and tied into two ponytails at
the sides of her head. They spiked outward instead of down. She wore black
leather fingerless gloves. Around her waist was a thick belt with silver studs.
It sat over her black layered skirt. The skirt’s length was about just above
her knee. She wore black mid-thigh belted boots.
Zathura’s two
handed battle axe hung over her shoulder, the heavier side was pointed toward
the ground. One side had a blunt side and a bladed side. On her left side was a
one handed crossbow. A pouch of bolts hung from the right side of her belt. She
chewed a piece of black gum and blew a black bubble.
“Sup,”
Zathura nodded.
“The one in
red is your partner, Akaban,” Undertaker pointed, “Don’t mid him, he’s just in
a bad mood. Then there are is Dante and Ai, the two with white hair. The one
with the sweeping hair over his eye is Ren. His partner is Sanya. She’s
braiding Ai’s hair. And Yin is over there dusting or something.”
“Like she’s
going to remember all of that,” Dante muttered.
“Dante, Ren,
Akaban, Ai, Sanya, Yin, and Undertaker, right?” Zathura looked around the room.
“You here
that, Akaban, she’s a quick one,” Undertaker smiled.
“Hmm,” Akaban
barely moved.
Zathura
grabbed a crossbow bold and fitted it in the crossbow. She raised her left arm
and aimed the bolt at Akaban. The vampire moved his head slightly and the bolt
struck the wall behind him.
Zathura
leaned on one leg, “Do I have your attention now? Look, I’ve done my dues,
alright. All the boys laughing at the little school girl wanting to be a
Hunter. They shut up real fast when the little school girl crushed a demons
skull with a fifty pound Bertha here when I was a year into training. I know
what I can do and I’m not going to stand here and work my way up the ranks when
I can tear your balcony down.”
“That thing
is fifty pounds?” Dante whispered to Ren.
“It’s been
four years,” Ren shrugged, “If she could swing fifty pounds her first year, it
could be heavier now.”
Akaban
reached into his coat and pulled out a long black gun. He barely flinched as he
fired the gun. Zathura dove to one side as she reached for another bold and
loaded her crossbow. She rolled on the ground behind one of the lower book
shelf. Another bullet flied overhead and when it passed, she stood and fired
another bolt.
When the bolt
was spent, Zathura jumped onto the book shelf. She gripped the handle of her
battle axe with both hands as she leaped off the shelf. Akaban fired another
bullet and it grazed Zathura’s boot. Zathura threw her arms forward as she
brought down the axe on Akaban’s location. Akaban didn’t move an inch from his
seat as he watched the mighty axe descent.
There was a
loud clash of metal on metal. Zathura landed on her feet. She looked at what
had stopped her attack. The snath of Undertaker’s Silver Fang stopped Zathura’s
weapon from landing its blow. The scythe was across his shoulders, his arm
draped over the narrow snath. Undertaker’s hat was gone and his green eyes were
clearly visible.
“I do like
this desk,” he smiled, “I would appreciate it in one piece.”
Akaban
lowered his feet from the desk and stood up, “I suppose she will do.”
“Did you have
to shoot at my walls to figure that out?” Undertaker sighed.
I really like the characters and their personalities. I'm not quite sure where you're talking the storyline but that's a good thing. It makes me want to come back. However, I feel like you're trying too hard to make the characters interesting, overloading then with eccentricities. I get the supernatural nature of the story so yeah being eccentric is pretty much expected but try not to over do it. And when you're introducing a new character, giving an all out description of them is a bit distracting. Try working their appearances and things like that into the story rather than just dumping it all in one go. I don't mean to sound picky because really, I love the story, just some advice :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice! I take all I can get. :3
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